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Maya Sarin's avatar

Stunning, as always <3

Andrea (Andy) Curran 🌄's avatar

Beautiful “light keeps trying

to find its way through,” this line stuck with me.

From Tender Ground's avatar

Wow 3 in one …. Brilliant 🧡

Azure Jo Storm's avatar

"The wind pulls at me softly,

like it almost knows

how tired I am

of carrying old storms

inside my ribs." this line! oh i love and feel this

Markéta N. | Poetry's avatar

Thin and uncertain but stubborn enough to stay, I love love and feel these lines

Aaliya's avatar

So beautiful

Virginia Curtis's avatar

Wonderful! <3 Love , Virg

Off Ramp to Brave Spaces's avatar

Yes, I (re)lived every moment of this poem with you. Beautiful